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Today This morning, i got up with the blue mood. i ate my breakfast as soon as i could. After that, i went to work. acturely, i do not get a real job. i am just a free stuff who haven't her own desk and her own assignments, in the corporation. i am free but upset. in the noon, i bought food for myself and ate them lonely.Taking a nap before i went to work again. i said to myself i should do something,and attem to do something.i called my friends and said as much as i thought. Luckly, i have a fantastic friend and i got better after the talk. in the evening, i cooked supper,and had it happily with my family. this is the day which have a happy ending.

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My first lesson to you is that 我 = I.  No exception.

Today

This morning, i got up with the blue mood. i ate my breakfast as soon as i could. After that, i went to work. acturely, i do not get a real job. i am just a free stuff who haven't her own desk and her own assignments, in the corporation. i am free but upset. in the noon, i bought food for myself and ate them lonely.Taking a nap before i went to work again. i said to myself i should do something,and attem to do something.i called my friends and said as much as i thought. Luckly, i have a fantastic friend and i got better after the talk. in the evening, i cooked supper,and had it happily with my family. this is the day which have a happy ending.

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Now that we have the basics corrected, we shall start correcting your grammar, spelling and even the style :)  孺子可教 :)

This morning, I got woke up with the in a blue mood. I ate my breakfast as soon as I could. After that, I and went to work. Acturely Actually, this is not my main  I do not get a real job. I am just a free lancing for a  stuff who haven't her own desk and her own assignments, in the corporation. I do not even have my own desk and direct assignment given to me in a normal way.  I am not too thrilled with this arrangement but I have a flexible schedule. am free but upset. In the noon, I bought food for myself and ate alone during lunchtime.  them lonely. After taking a nap before I went to work again. I said to myself I should do something,and constructive and attempt to do at it. However, in the end, I called my friends and we chatted away talked as much as I thought before. Luckily, I have a fantastic friend and I got felt better afterwards the talking. In the evening, I cooked supper, and had it happily dinner with my family was great. This was So glad the day which had ended on a happy note. ending

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