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My Eyesight Please correct my writing. In my city, people who are 39-year-old or less can be checked up their bodies for free. I am still 38, so I applied for that by phone. I am going to go to the health centre to be checked up next week. I am worry about my eyesight. I often cannot read dates on a calendar on a wall in a room from other side. I have heard that blinking eyes is good for our eyesight, so I blink my eyes a lot every day when my eyes are tired. I hope my eyesight will better. Thank you for reading.

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My Eyesight

Please correct my writing.

In my city, people who are those 39 years of age and under-old or less can be checked up their bodies for free physical checkups. I am still 38 and so I applied for that by phoned for an appointment and is scheduled next week at the health centre. I am going to go to the health centre to be checked up next week. I am worry worried about my eyesight. I often cannot read dates clearly on a wall calendar on a wall in a room from other side. I have heard that blinking eyes is a good exercise for our eyesight, . So I blinked my eyes a lot every day quite often when my eyes are tired. I hope my eyesight will become better.

Thank you for reading.

I am sorry to say that that no amount of blinking will help you on this.  Welcome to the club of growing old.  As we enter the 40s of one's life, the eyesight will change and there will be more aches and pains in our body.  We have to watch what we eat.  The irony is that when we are young, we cannt eat fabulous food because we can't afford.  Now we can buy them we cannot afford to eat it because we have to watch our health!  You may not understand this Chinese expression, I am still sure you can understand the individual meaning of each kanji albeit in broken Japanese... 人老無藥醫. :(

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My Eyesight

Please correct my writing.

In my city, people up to 39 years of age have a privilege for free medical checkup. who are 39-year-old or less can be checked up their bodies for free. I am still 38, so I applied for that by via phone. I am going to go to the health centre to be checked up next week. I am worry worried about my eyesight. I often cannot read dates on a calendar placed on a wall in a room from other side. I have heard that blinking eyes is good for our eyesight, so I blink my eyes often/a lot every day when my eyes they are tired. I hope my eyesight will be/get better.

Thank you for reading.

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