My Journal, 02 Jan 2012 of the 2nd of January.

Yesterday we invited a lot many of my wife's relatives to my new house as house warming 1 and  so that I showed them into my house at the same time to celebrate the New Year of celebrattion on a new year.
We treated them to sushi and traditional Japanese food traditional cusines. After the meal, my two daughters served deserts made by them.which each cooked for them after the meal.
After they left my home, the party was over, I did not feel well. fell into a bad condition. I unusually had a little headache and came to suffer since I had a serious from a whiplash injury  heavily.
I was roaring out of my suffering for a while. The pain was inexcruciable.  To be honest, Ithought I was going to die.  There are so many things that I need felt desparating for my life though I have a lot of things to achieve.

I had a tablet of painkiller I took a painkiller tablet and laid down. After a couple of hours, I recoverd as if the incident had never happened at all. 2 the previous condition was a lie.

1.  This is better since the way you write can be construed as you are showing off your wealth!

2.  If you wanted to add some spice to the sentence, you can write something like, "it was as if it was just a nightmare."

My journal entry for January 02, '12.

Yesterday we invited many of my wife's relatives to our new house so that we could show it to them, and at the same time celebrate the new year.
We treated them to Sushi, and Japanese traditional cuisine. My two daughters served them desserts after the meal,  which they had cooked.
After they left my home, I started to feel sick. I unusually have a light headache and have also suffered from a whiplash injury heavily.
I was crying out of my suffering for a while, and to be honest, I felt desperate for my life though I still have a lot of things to achieve.
I took a painkiller and laid down. After a couple of hours, I recovered as though my condition had not happened at all.