A teenager leaves a video before he died

Today, I read a story about the teenager who made a video before he died. It was so sad to watch that video. Although he could speak, he chose to use note cards to tell us about his life. Three times he “cheated" death, yet, when he told us of each death experience, he still kept smiling as if he were just telling us about normal, everyday life. I felt that he was incredibly brave. I do not know how I would react if I knew that I was dying, and I'm afraid to think about it. He, however, was not afraid. He related that when he was experiencing the third near-death experience, he had a particularly detailed dream. He was listening to a Kid Cudi song while in a white room that had no walls. I think he was somewhat in heaven already and did not have any physical worries. The last two notecards read: "Do you believe in angels or God?" and "I do." That made me think about the church near my workplace. Such thoughts do make me feel at peace.

Tracy, overall, a nice try! Please watch your "tenses" and please review those websites I referred you to ("He were..." = incorrect. He was = correct). Watching English language movies is good, but you should also be reading as it is a different method of learning and it will directly help you with your grammar and compositions. Finally, try to figure out by yourself why I made the changes that I made... (but, of course, if you cannot, you may ask me!) - J.