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the awkward moment I am still not sure that today an awkward moment happened. When I and my beloved family went to one of chicken restaurant, I decide to went to the toilet. And you know what? There was no tissue! What should I do? It was so repulsive.

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of course, bad situation.
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what an embarassing situation
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the awkward moment

I am still not sure that today an awkward moment happened. When I and my beloved family went to one of chicken restaurant, I decide to went to the toilet. And you know what? There was no tissue! What should I do? It was so repulsive.

 

I STILL CAN'T IMAGINE THAT SOMETHING VERY AWKWARD HAPPENED TODAY. WHEN I ALONGWITH MY BELOVED FAMILY, WENT TO A CHICKEN RESTAURANT, I HAD TO USE THE TOILED. AND YOU KNOW WHAT? THERE WERE NO TISSUES! WHAT SHOULD I HAVE DONE? IT WAS SO REPULSIVE.

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The Awkward Moment

I am still not sure that whether or not today an awkward moment happened today. When I and my beloved family my beloved family and I went to one of a chicken restaurant, I decide needed to went use to the toilet. And you know what? There was were no tissues! What should I have done? It was so repulsive.

 

Definitely not bad. Just some issues with grammar in the first sentence. Probably has to do with directly translating from Bahasa to English. There's also probably a better way to say "chicken restaurant", that sounds awkward. Perhaps the exact type of restaurant it is.

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