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12/28 today's diary Hello. My Name is Takashi Ando. I’m Japanese. I am working at a startup in Tokyo. Now,I feel that I have to study speaking English and Chinese seriously. Cause,I started writing a diary in English and Chinese. Maybe I’ll make many mistakes in a diary but I want to reduce mistakes and speak English and Chinese more fluently. I’m going to talk about news and IT. Thank you!

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Diary for 12/28

Hello. My Name is Takashi Ando.

I’m Japanese.

I am working at a startup in Tokyo. (works but I recommend: I work for a startup in Tokyo.)

Now, I (added a space) feel that I have to study speaking English and Chinese seriously.

That is why I've started writing a diary in English and Chinese.

Maybe I’ll make many mistakes in a diary (be careful using words too often when it is not necessary) but I want to make less mistakes and speak English and Chinese more fluently.  (Recommended: I might make many mistakes but I want to work towards speaking English and Chinese more fluently.)

I will be talking about news and IT.

Thank you!

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12/28 Today's Diary

Hello. My Name is Takashi Ando. I’m Japanese and I am working at a startup company in Tokyo. Now, I feel that I have to study in speaking English and Chinese seriously. Cause,Therefore I started to write writing a diary in English and Chinese.

Maybe I’ll make I am sure that I will make many mistakes in a my diary but I want to reduce lessen my mistakes and able to speak English and Chinese more fluently.

I’m going to talk about news and IT. Mostly my diary entries are current news and things related to information technology (IT).

Thank you!

It will be a great idea for you to have 3 sections in your diary.  In Japanese, followed by English and then Chinese.  This way you have the original to compare and see your mistakes in translation etc.  Also by keeping a diary in three languages, your skill in them will improve quickly.

You need to learn the punctuation spacing rules of English.  If you do not know how, see http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm

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I think overall you did a great job Takashi! Hope my corrections prove helpful! Take care!

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