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what i have got from the work after i graduated half year. July.1.2011, i graduated from the university. That means i should go to hard work and support myself no depend on my parents any more. I want to become a international trade saler, so i choice the zhongshan city,guangdong province.I work as a traffic in aopen company.i think if i want to become a saler ,i should learn more about the international transportation.After i worked half year.i feel so tired on time. i offten ask myself whether i have not adapt this life or i have not the ability to this work.but i think that i should not give up. i cannot belive that i have not the ability to do this work.i should pay more hard to study.The spring festive is coming in china,but i have to work when holiday. i will have to have the festive lonely that without my parents. i hope my parents and friends will have a good heathy and have a happy new year.I should hard to study and improve by myself.Come on.

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My first lesson to you is that 我 = I.  No exception.

what i have got from the work after i graduated half year.

July.1.2011, i graduated from the university. That means i should go to hard work and support myself no depend on my parents any more. I want to become a international trade saler, so i choice the zhongshan city,guangdong province.I work as a traffic in aopen company.i think if i want to become a saler ,i should learn more about the international transportation.After i worked half year.i feel so tired on time. i offten ask myself whether i have not adapt this life or i have not the ability to this work.but i think that i should not give up. i cannot belive that i have not the ability to do this work.i should pay more hard to study.The spring festive is coming in china,but i have to work when holiday. i will have to have the festive lonely that without my parents. i hope my parents and friends will have a good heathy and have a happy new year.I should hard to study and improve by myself.Come on.

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Hi,Andy.Thanks.Have a good new year to you!
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carry on,your dream will come true.

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