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Ginger tea Please correct my writing. I don't like winter season very much because I have sensitivity to cold. I drink ginger tea during every winter so that I warm all my body. I buy a bottle of sliced ginger at a supermarket so that I make ginger tea by myself. I have a portable thermos bottle so that I can drink my ginger tea whenever I want. (I'm trying to use "so that" in this writing.) Thank you for reading.

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Ginger Tea You need to capitalize the first letter of every word in a title.

Please correct my writing.

I don't do not like winter season very much because I have a sensitivity to the cold. (It is better to say, "I am sensitive to the cold") I drink ginger tea during every winter so that I can warm up. all my body.

I buy bought a bottle of sliced ginger at a supermarket so that I make ginger the tea by myself. I have a portable thermos bottle so that I can drink my ginger tea whenever and wherever I want.

(I'm trying to use "so that" in this writing.)

Thank you for reading.

Again do not start on a new line with a new sentence unless it is for paragraphing purposes.

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I like to drink sports drink very much during the summer.
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And what do you drink during the summer?
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Thank you. Good luck Seda too.
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You like ginger tea and I like autumn and winter seasons.You enjoy your tea and I enjoy drinking coffee. Good luck Toshi

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