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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am a very easy going man 1. I like to talk chat with others and debate with others. I always have my own ideas, so if you want to talk, with some you can 2 choose me. I am glad to talk with you and also I can learn English from you.3
1. From the picture, we can see that you are a man.
2. The way you write. "You can <some action, verb etc> with me" in this context gives you an air of superiority over the reader. This is rude. Same as Chinese, there words you use to your superior and your subordinates. Wrong use will lead you into great trouble. For example, 呈 vs 賜.
3. This is understood otherwise why would you want to talk with strangers here. Best to leave it out. It makes so sound so shallow. 画蛇添足.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am easygoing. I like to chat and debate with others. So I want to make friends from the people all over the world. We can help each other in our common hobbies. Nearly I am learning knowledge about fiance. If some friends want to learn Chinese I can also help you!
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