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You must health everyday----my son My son is three years old,He is so lovely.But his resistance is weak.From he was six month up to now,we take him to the doctor nearly once a month.It make us feel unhappy.Everytime when the nurse give or take an injection for him, he cry so pitiful,I cry with him. I don't know why he gets a cold so easily,once he gets a cold,he will cough,If he cough,he will asthma,it make us feel terrible.In winter,other child play outdoor,But we only take him out in a good sunshine day. Some time,I think I should learn something about doctor,If I become a doctor,I can take good care of my son and my family! Many people told me:Don't worry,when he grow up,it will be OK. Yes,I believe it,my son must health everyday!

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You must be healthy everyday, my son.

My son is three years old.  He is so lovely.B is adorable but his resistanceconstituent is weak.  From the time he was six monthsold up totill now, we have to take him to the doctor nearly once a month. It make us feel unhappy. EverytimeEach time when the nurse givesor takehim an injection for him, he crycries so pitifully that I crycried along with him.

I don'tdo not know why he gets a cold so easily.  Once he does gets a cold,he will cough,If he cough,he willcoughs so badly as if he has asthma.  It pained make us feel terrible. In winter, other children can play outdoor ,Butbut we can only take him out in a goodwhen there is plenty of sunshine day.

Some timeSometimes, I think I should learn something about medicine. doctor, If I become ama doctor, I can take good care of my son and my family! Many people tell told me, "Don't worry, when he grows up,ithe will be OK." Yes, I believe in their words but now  it, my son, you must healthremain healthy everyday!

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Your son will be OK.you are worried about your son .it can make you stressful .Do not annoy yourself and enjoy being with him.
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You are a mother and mothers love their children.I know you love his eyes.You love his smile and his mind.I am sure if you can bring his a world full of happiness ,you will eagerly do it.Please please don`t worry about your son.He will be a great man.I am sure he will be a kind and great man.Just hold your son in your arms and tell him every day how much you love him.With my best wishes :)))

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