First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I lived in Michigan, US from 2005 to 2006.(with my husband & son) and had many great experiences there.
Hope I can talk fluently in English and want to make many friends!
Someday I'd love to live in California or Hawaii... anyway warm places in US:)
And then I've been teaching Japanese for foreigners in Japan.
Love: Hawaii, Las Vegas, Wine, Photo, Trip
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Introducing Myself
I lived in Michigan, USA, with my husband and son, from 2005 to 2006, and had many pleasant experiences there. Hopefully, I can learn to speak fluently in English in the future, and I want to make many friends on this website! Someday, I would love to live in California or Hawaii... or some other "warm" state in the US:) Since then, I've been teaching Japanese for foreigners in Japan.
Love: Hawaii, Las Vegas, Wine, Photo, Trip.
Yuyu, a nice job! Nothing technically wrong with your original essay, but I took the liberty of rewriting it as above so that it "flows" better and/or more "naturally" to a native speaker such as myself. I also hope that I correctly "interpreted" what you meant to write, but if not, my apologies! Jonathan p.s. Yes, as a native Californian, there's nothing better than constant 70-80 degree weather! p.p.s. Now, I'm a little confused given our earlier correspondence. Are in in Japan now? Or back in Michigan? LOL!
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Thank you for your comment!! Yes! I like warmer climates!! Winter is very cold in Michigan. :(
I'd love to visit in Florida!!!! I hope your dreams come true about moving to Japan!!
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Welcome, I'm glad you had a great experience in the U.S. Warmer climates are always better. Florida is very nice (minus hurricanes). I hope to be able to one day move to Japan and teach English there. Good luck in your en devours.
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Wow! Really?! Great!! :)
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all about your love are all about i wish :D
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