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Impudent Flu Next time when you intend to visit me, make that damn call before to see if I'm ready for you or not!! At least knock my door or even my window before coming in!! Sorry, my friends. I'm not talking to you. I'm talking to that flu which made me ill for four long days. Does that make you feel better?!! Damn you! Bad flu, fever, sneezing, coughing, aches and pains all over my body….. so what?!! I'm very well now. I still have my eyes at the top of my face, my nose is still in the middle and my ears are in the same place. I can walk and even run in the morning. The doctor asked me to stop bringing up crazy, have a rest, drink hot drinks, take my medicine and throw my PC away!! I listened to him because I had no choice. My sister answered my mobile calls and read every message was sent to me by my friends or coworkers. She even read some of the old messages. "I will pray to sun to shine for you and pray to the wind to blow gently on your back", she read that loudly and admirably. " Well said!!" She commented. "Is your friend an atheist?!!" She asked. I answered, "No! But he prays to the sun and nature!! Of course he is an atheist!!" She smiled and replied, "Oh, yeah, that's you again with your sarcastic words. Thank God! You're OK." I smiled weakly but my dad smiled cheerfully which made me want to get stronger. Little Rose couldn't understand why she should have been away from me so she sneaked into my room and woke me up. " Are you going to die?" She asked. "Don't go to work tomorrow! Stay home. Better!! I can make you some tea. I know how to make it. I saw mum. Shall I tell you how… " She continued till her mother found her sitting on my bed talking to me so she carried her out of my room. It was funny she shouted in her mother's face, " I promise. I won't get ill. Leave me alone." Any way forget all about that nonsense!! I missed you, my friends. How are you?:)))))

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Impudent Flu

Next time when you intend to visit me, make that damn call before to see if I'm ready for you or not1!! At least knock on my door or even my the window before entering coming in!! Sorry, my friends. I'm am not talking to you. I'm am talking to that flu which made me ill for four long days. Does that make you Feel better now that you know who I am referring to?!! Damn you! Bad Flu and your friends, Fever, Sneezing, Coughing, Aches and Pains all over my body….. so what?!! No thanks to you guys.  I'm am very well now. I still have my eyes at the top of on my face; my nose is still in the middle there and my ears are in the same place. I can walk and even run in the morning.

The doctor asked me to stop bringing up crazy, 2 have a rest, drink hot liquids drinks, take my medicine and throw my PC away!! 3 I listened to him because I had no choice. My sister answered my mobile calls and read every message that was sent to me by my from friends or co-workers. She even read some of the old messages. "I will pray to that the sun to shines for warmly on you and pray to the wind to blow massage you gently on your back" as my sister .  she read that out loudly and admirably. " Well said!!", she commented. "Is your friend an atheist?!!" She asked. I answered, "No. ! But He prays to the sun and nature!! Of course he is an atheist!!" She smiled and replied, "Oh, yeah, that's you again with your sarcastic words sarcasm again. Thank God! You're OK now." I smiled weakly but my dad smiled cheerfully as he listened to our conversation. His smiles which made me want to get stronger and better.

Little Rose couldn't not understand why she should have to been far away from me.   so She sneaked into my room and woke me up. "Are you going to die?" She asked. "Don't go to work tomorrow! Stay home. Get better!! I can make you some tea. I know how to make it. I saw mummy doing it. Shall I can tell you how… " She continued till until her mother found her sitting on my bed, talking to chatterng away.  So me so she was carried her out of my room. It was funny how she shouted in her at our mother's face, " I promise. I won't get ill! Leave me alone."

Any way Anyway, forget all about that nonsense!! these ramblings.  I missed you, my friends. How are you?:)))))

I am well, preparing and anticipating for the coming holidays.  Thank you.  Am glad that you are well for this year end festivities.

1.  See #3 of http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Common%20English%20Errors.htm

2.  Don't understand this sentence, so I am skipping it.

3.  Only one exclamation mark is good enough.  For exaggeration use three. Any other number of them are used in comic strips.  Remember this is your formal essay not a comic strip!

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Thank you, Kobtan.
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hahah,,, it's was plaisant and funny to read you ^^
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@ karylam I agree with you, Kary and I'll listen to your advice because I don't want to get sick again. Thank you:)))))
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@ Padraig Yes, with a hay hat, Old Macdonald!:))))

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