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Tom Swayer
Tom, a mischievous boy, lived with his Aunt Polly. Whenever summer comes, he would always run away play truant and go swimming instead of going to school. The next day, Aunt Polly punished him for playing hookey by making him whitewache whitewash their entire fence. When While he was doing his punishmentwhitewaches the fence, a group of boys come here came and played happily around near him. He is scared was afraid of being ridiculed by the boys publicly. them when suddenly, an idea occured popped into his mind. He pretended to the boys that he is was not whitewashing but painting the fence as an artist. The boys watched his every movement and get more and more became more interested, more and more absorbed.Finally they all were too eagerly wanted to help to join him in his funto whitewash the entire fence.
What a clever boy he Tom is! He discovered a great law of human trait to crave for attention. antion that, in order to make a man or a boy covet a thing, it is only necessary to make the thing difficult to attain. The more difficult a thing to covet, it becomes more desirous. I can find easily these types of person around us people who pursuit his pursuing a dreaming job and doesn't care about regarless whether he likes it or not. What All he knows is this job that it is difficult to attain and therefore he must beat others to get it. Sometimes I thought think humanbeings are magical creatures. They are both the cleverest and the most stupidest thing creature in the world. One of the Another human weakness is we always blindly follow others blindly and enjoy it. To avoid this sort of thing happening to me, I should make it clear that what do I really want?. No matter what happens, remember to follow your heart.
You really need to work on your tenses. When you are describing something of the past, use past tense. Use present tense when you are conveying the time in the present even though the event is in the past. Other than this you have cogent thoughts and write well.
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