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Tom Swayer Tom, a mischievous boy, lived with his Aunt Polly. When summer comes, he always run away and go swimming instead of going to school. The next day, Aunt Polly punishes him for playing hookey by making him whitewache their entire fence. When he whitewaches the fence, a group of boys come here and plays happily around him. He is scared of being ridiculed by the boys publicly. Suddenly, an idea occured his mind. He pretends to the boys that he is not whitewashing but painting as an artist. The boys watches his every move and get more and more interested, more and more absorbed.Finally they all eagerly wanted to help him to whitewash the entire fence. What a clever boy he is! He discovered a great law of human antion that, in order to make a man or a boy covet a thing, it is only necessary to make the thing difficult to attain. I can find easily these type of person around us who pursuit his dreaming job and doesn't care about whether he like it or not. What he knows is this job is difficult to attain and he must beat others to get it. Sometimes I thought humanbeings are magical creatures. They are both the cleverest and stupidest thing in the word.One of the human weakness is we always blindly follow others and enjoy it. To avoid this happend to me, I should make it clear that what do I really want? No matter what happened, remember follow your heart.

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Tom Swayer

Tom, a mischievous boy, lived with his Aunt Polly. Whenever summer comes, he would always run away play truant and go swimming instead of going to school. The next day, Aunt Polly punished him for playing hookey by making him whitewache whitewash their entire fence. When While he was doing his punishmentwhitewaches the fence, a group of boys come here came and played happily around near him. He is scared was afraid of being ridiculed by the boys publicly. them when suddenly, an idea occured popped into his mind. He pretended to the boys that he is was not whitewashing but painting the fence as an artist. The boys watched his every movement and get more and more became more interested, more and more absorbed.Finally they all were too eagerly wanted to help to join him in his funto whitewash the entire fence.

What a clever boy he Tom is! He discovered a great law of human trait to crave for attention.  antion that, in order to make a man or a boy covet a thing, it is only necessary to make the thing difficult to attain. The more difficult a thing to covet, it becomes more desirous.  I can find easily these types of person around us people who pursuit his pursuing a dreaming job and doesn't care about regarless whether he likes it or not. What All he knows is this job that it is difficult to attain and therefore he must beat others to get it. Sometimes I thought think humanbeings are magical creatures. They are both the cleverest and the most stupidest thing creature in the world. One of the Another human weakness is we always blindly follow others blindly and enjoy it. To avoid this sort of thing happening to me, I should make it clear that what do I really want?. No matter what happens, remember to follow your heart.

You really need to work on your tenses.  When you are describing something of the past, use past tense.   Use present tense when you are conveying the time in the present even though the event is in the past.  Other than this you have cogent thoughts and write well.

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