What a day!
今天的天氣非常熱，I feel that i was inside the oven!
吃了飯, 就去圖書館做功課到三點，
然後跟朋友一塊兒去龍山寺看一看，從龍山寺
走路到西門去家樂富買一點東西。去西門丁吃冰，
吃冰以後就回家。我跟朋友坐公車去。
現在我覺得很累！
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What a day!
今天的天氣非常熱，I feel that i was inside the oven! 感觉就像自己在烤炉里一样!吃了飯之后, 就去圖書館做功課，一直到三點。
之后又和朋友一塊兒去龍山寺转了转（that means not only just to see something there,but to play or just want to relax），從龍山寺出来后，
接着我们又走路到西門的家樂福買了一點東西，然后去西門丁吃冰，
吃冰以後我们就坐公車回家了。所以現在我覺得很累！
你中文很好啊！加一些 转折词 或者 语气助词 会更加感觉更加的通畅哦！
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What a day!
今天的天气非常热，热到骨子里去了！I feel that i was inside the oven!吃了饭，我就去图书馆做功课，一直做到三点。之后，我跟朋友一块儿坐公车去龙山寺看了看。
从龙山寺走路到西门，去家乐福买了一点儿东西，还去西门丁吃冰。
现在我觉得很累！
主要是简体字和繁体字的区别，不算错误，比较通顺。
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What a day!
今天的天氣非常熱，I feel that i was inside the oven!(我覺得自己好像在火爐中一樣，such weather is called 桑拿天／sauna weaather)吃了飯, 就去圖書館做功課到三點，
然後跟朋友一塊兒去龍山寺看一看，從龍山寺
走路到西門去家樂富買一點東西。去西門丁吃冰，
吃冰以後就回家。我跟朋友坐公車回去。
現在我覺得很累！
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Is it? I think not, i'm now studying chinese and I need to polish my grammar n sentence structure and learn more words! hahaha:))
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how come your chinese is so good?
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