First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a student of master masters student in IT engineering at Tehran university and I'm in the second year of my degree. I think one of the most important things that I can do improve my life is learning English, ex: for gaining better positions in my future job  career, for continuing my education and so many other things.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a student of a master master degree in IT engineering at Tehran university and I'm in the second year of my degree the course. I think one of the most important thing things that I can do do in order to improve my life is learning English, ex: i.e for gaining getting the better better position in my future job professional life, for continuing my education and so many other things purposes/benefits.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a student of majoring in IT engineering at Tehran university, and I'm in the second year of my degree. I think one of the most important things that I can do to improve my life is to learning English, so I may for gaining a better position in my future career, for continue my education and so many other things.

Correct this entry?  OK!  Every sentence tells the story of who does what.  You are a student of IT, not master.  If it is one of then it's things, do + to as Ali indicated, but why didn't you finish the word "example"?  Not finishing words is a bad idea unless you're texting your best friend who knows what you mean with two letters instead of the word.  Pay attention to the articles; "positon" needs an article.  It's a great entry and we are happy to see you here.  My Skype:  brian.madden4