My day.

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In the morning I usually get up usually at nine o`clock. I never get up early. I have breakfast with my wife. At ten o`clock I go to work by car. In the afternoon I have my lunch and drink a cup of coffee or tea. At four o`clock I go shopping. I sometimes to buy a loaf of bread, some butter, some milk and some meet meat. Then I get home and work on the computer for about two hours. I never go out in the evening, but (just) and stay at home. I cock cook dinner and eat it with my family. After dinner, I sometimes listen to music or watch television. However, I usually play with my daughter for about one hour in the evening. I again work on the computer at nine o`clock. At one o`clock in the morning I go to bed. I never go to bed early.

A good piece of writing, but you have used a lot of short sentences.  Next time, try to combine two elements together.  For example: I have breakfast with my wife, and then drive to work at about 10 o'clock.

My day.

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I usually get up at nine o`clock in the morning. I never get up early. I have breakfast with my wife. At ten o`clock I go to work by car. In the afternoon I have my lunch and drink a cup of coffee or tea. At four o`clock I go shopping. I sometimes  buy a loaf of bread, some butter, some milk and some meat. Then I get home and work on the computer about two hours. I never go out in the evening and stay home. I cook dinner and eat it with my family. After dinner, I sometimes listen to music or watch television. However, I usually play with my daughter about one hour in the evening.  I work on the computer again at nine o`clock. At one o`clock in the morning I go to bed. I never go to bed early.