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Today my son Jorge has brought some photographs with his classmate from the school.
My doughter María she has stayed to eat in her classmate´s home.
My wife has gone to the supermarket to change a tub of butter, because we bought it last Wednesday and it already was broken.
It already was broken but we didn´t realise until we put it in the frigde. It has been returned without problems.
This afternoon i have stayed asleep after eat during a hour.
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quiero practicar:
me he quedado dormido...
se ha quedado a comer...
se lo han cambiado sin problemas...
una tarrina de mantequilla = a tub of butter
ya estaba rota cuando la compramos...
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Who can correct me this small text? Who can correct this short text for me?
Today my son Jorge has brought some photographs with his classmate from the school. (photos of Jorge and his classmate?)
Today my son Jorge brought home some photographs of him and his classmate from school.
My doughter María she has stayed to eat in her classmate´s home.
My daughter Maria has gone to eat at her classmate's home.
My wife has gone to the supermarket to change a tub of butter, because we bought it last Wednesday and it already was broken. (not sure what a tub of butter is but this looks good).
It already was already broken but we didn´t realise it until we put it in the fridge frigde. It has been returned without any problems.
This afternoon i have stayed asleep after eat during a hour.
After eating, I slept during the afternoon for an hour.
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