The Negative Effects of Game Addiction_Introduction
Can anybody imagine that all minor people under 19 are not able to
access online game officially? South Korea governments prevent teenagers
from playing game at midnight. This shows the fact that authorities warn the
harmful effects of highly excessive playing game. The reason that Falling
into game addiction is problematic can be explained by these three effects:
a lack of physical activities, alteration of brain function, and limit of social
contacts.
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The Negative Effects of Game Addiction: Introduction
in Korea, all minors, people under the age of 19, aren't able to
officially access online games. Can you believe that?
The South Korean governments prevents teenagers from playing these games past midnight.
This shows the how the authorities protect this population from the harmful effects of playing these game. Addiction to these games is real and is due to:
a lack of physical activity,an alteration in brain function, and the limitation of social
interaction.
만약 우리는 서로의 글들을 계속 수정한다면, 우리의 우정이 유지될 거에요.
그건대문자로써야합니다.
바꿔쓸수있는표현, 또는나의추천입니다.
이건더자연스럽거나더일반적인방법의표현입니다.
오타, 또는수정이필요한부분그리고단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.
밑줄을있을때, 맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.
보라색 제코멘트입니다.
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