Today's diary

It's a really really really hot day!!
I wanted to stay home all of a day to stop being burning keep from being burnt, but I had an appointment with my friend.  
So I went out with a my irritation at 11:00 am.  <-[Or "So I went out, irritated, at 11 am."]
When I arrived at my destination, I got a phone call from my friend.  
He said, "Sorry man, I can't get going because I have a sudden and hurry appointment."  <-[Or "'Sorry man, I can't meet you because I have another appointment.'"]
I got angry, but I couldn't didn't have a choice.  
When I came got back to my home, I was really wet with perspiration <-["sweat" is more common].
It's really a bad day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Today diary

It's really really really hot day!!
I wanted to stay home all day to stop from being burnt, but I had a appointment with my friend.
So, I went out annoyed at 11:00 AM
When I arrived at my destination, I got a phone call from my frined
He said "Sorry man, I can't get going because I have a sudden appointment"
I got angry, but I couldn't have a choice (you could say instead: but I didn't have a choice).
When I came back to home, I was really wet with perspiration.
It's really bad day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!