First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want to talk with the more people who is not in china,
> I want to talk with more people who are not in China. OR
  I want to talk with more people outside of China.  OR
  I want to talk more with people outside of China. [little different meaning]

and now I am need good english for what I am doing.
> and now I need good English for what I am doing. OR
   and now I need good English for my job.

The poor english effect my communication with other,
> My poor English affects my communication with others.

[new sentence]
that is all.
That is all.  OR
That's all.

Good try!  ^ ^