Nov 30th
On going to the kitchen i turned on the light because it was dark.my bother suddenly shouted angrily when the light went on ,i spoilt a film which he was developing.
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我 = I no exception. You also need to the rules of punctuation spacing. See http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm
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Nov 30th
On going to the kitchen i turned on the light because it was dark.my bother suddenly shouted angrily when the light went on ,i spoilt a film which he was developing.
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