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Hello, my name is Betsabe Mendez and i'm learning inglish since septeber 2009, i'm learning inglish because the pleace where i live is border with US, and almost all the jobs always ask you if you know inglish, i can understand a little more then i can speak, i not have a good pronuntation and the writing is more difficult for me, so i hope that this and you can help me because really really u want learn and can talk and read and writte, i like inglish and really i want lear correctly.
I don't have idea that how this works, so if someone can told me i will be very very grateful.
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My first Notebook
Hello, my name is Betsabe Mendez andI don't have any idea
Thanks
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Thanks a lot for you help.
Now what more can i do??
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Hello, Betsabé! English is a second language to me as well. So, my contribution might not be first rate, but I offer it to you anyway, in the hope it can help you. I think your text could be written also as follows:
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Hello! My name is Betsabe Mendez and I have been learning English since September 2009. I'm learning English because the place where I live is at the border with USA, and in almost all my job interviews I am asked if I know English. I can understand a little more then I can speak. I do not have a good pronunciation and writing is more difficult to me. So, I hope that you can help me because I really (really) want to learn and to be able to talk, read and write well in English. I like English and I really want to learn it.
I have no idea of how this works. So, if someone can tell me, I will be very grateful.
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I think you have done a good work, Betsabé. I think I understood the idea you wanted to communicate and that, in my opinion, is the most important thing in a writing.
Best regards. Valter
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