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We must writte a dialogue and please correct it!

A: Now, I'm sure you'll agree that sports competitions are fun for all students.
B: Yes, you're right, but don't forget that many students are members of other clubs in their free time.
A: Yeah, but for the students theyat aren't at any clubs in their free time it is a good solution (I personally suggest "way" here) to find hobbyies or new friends.
B: Of course, but if you are a member of a club in your free time and youre friend would go to a club in youre school and you also would go with him... do you want to go be in two clubs?
A: Why not?
B: Then ("Then" is suggested here) when will do you make do your homework or learn for your class tests?
A: Maybe in the evening or on the week-end and... I don't think you have a practice every day a practise...
B: But you also have school in the afternoon... and if you have a big competition you also must train on the week-end.
A: I don't care. I find think it is a good idea and I would go to the lobs if they were are been here.
B: Okay. It is your opinion. I am against it! ("I am against it" is kinda rude, If I were you, I would go "It's your opinion, which I can't agree with".)

Is this right?

We must writte a dialouge dialogue and please correct it!

A: Now, I'm sure you'll agree that sports competitions are fun for all students.
B: Yes, you're right, but don't forget that many students are members of other clubs in their free time.
A: Yeah, but for the students they aren't at any clubs in their free time those who are not, it is a good solution way to find hobbys hobbies or make new friends.
B: Of course, but if you are a club member of a club in your free time and youre friend would goes to a club in youre school and, you also would you go with him... do you want to go in two clubs? Then you will be going to two clubs.
A: Why not?
B: When do you make homework or learn for class tests? Then where's the time to study?
A: Maybe in the evening or on week-end weekends.  and... I don't think you have every day a practise... Besides, I don't think you can study everyday.
B: But you also have school in the afternoon. And if you have a big competition you also must train on the weekends too week-end.
A: I don't care. I find It's is a good idea and I would to go to clubs if they are been here.
B: Okay. It is your opinion. but I'm am against it!

In writing dialogs, keep you sentences short.  We don't use long sentences to speak.

Is this right?

We must write a dialogue and please correct it!

A: Now, I'm sure you'll agree that sports competitions are fun for all students.
B: Yes, you're right, but don't forget that many students are members of other clubs in their free time.
A: Yeah, but for the students that aren't at any clubs in their free time it is a good solution to find hobbies or new friends.
B: Of course, but if you are a member of a club in your free time and your friend would go to a club in your school, you also would go with him... do you want to be in two clubs?
A: Why not?
B: When do you do homework or study for class tests?
A: Maybe in the evening or during the weekend and... I don't think you have a practise every day...
B: But you also have school in the afternoon... and if you have a big competition you also must train on the weekend.
A: I don't care. I think it is a good idea and I would go to lobs if they were here.
B: Okay. It is your opinion. I am against it!

Is this right?

A: Yeah, but for the students they aren't at any clubs in their free time it is a good solution to find hobbies or new friends.
B: Of course, but if you are a member of a club in your free time and you’re friend would go to a club in you’re school and you also would go with him... do you want to go in two clubs?
A: Why not?
B: When do you make homework or learn for class tests?
A: Maybe in the evening or on week-end and... I don't think you have every day a practice...
B: But you also have school in the afternoon... and if you have a big competition you also must train on the week-end.
A: I don't care. I find it is a good idea and I would go to lobs if they are been here.
B: Okay. It is your opinion. I am against it!