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My little angel series two
Last weekend, my daughter and I went out to take for a walk. There was a dog on the street. She thought that the dog is was very big, So so she shouted: "Mum, looking look! There are is a biggest dog over there." "But the dog is not the biggest one you have ever seen,isn't it?" I answered. She thought for a while , and then told to me:"Mum. But I think its tongue is the biggest one that I‘ve ever seen."The mind of children The children's mind is so different from the adults'. Whenever I see her innocence eyes, I always want to be as like as her age. I just hope that I can go back to my childhood.
Nice job ,I just tried my best to correct this ,I am not a native speaker........
My little angel series two
Last weekend, my daughter and I went out for a walk. There was a dog on the street. She thought that the dog was very big, so she shouted "Mum, look! There's a huge dog over there." "But that dog is not the biggest one you have ever seen,is it?" I asked. She thought for a while and then told to me "Mum, but I think its' tongue is the biggest one I‘ve ever seen." The minds of children are so different from adult. Whenever I look at her innocent eyes, I always want to be like her age again.
My little angel, series two
Last weekend, my daughter and I went out for a walk. There was a dog on the street. She thought that the dog was very big, so she shouted: "Mum, looking! There's a huge dog over there." "But the dog is not the biggest one you have ever seen,isn't it?" I answered. She thought for a while and then told to me: "Mum. But I think its tongue is the biggest one I‘ve ever seen." The mind of children is so different from the adult. Whenever I see her innocent eyes, I always want to be as like as her age again.
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