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My Daughter
My daughter is eleven months old. She can stand up all by herself and can walk a few steps. She does not like what little girls usually like, such as dolls and toy puppies. She is interested in laptops, cellphones, wires, earphones, chargers, and the like. My husband says she has two possible development tendencies: outcomes; either to be a scientist or an Internet computer geek.
My daughter
My daughter is eleven months old. She can stand up all by herself and walk a few steps. She does not like what little girls usually like, such as dolls and toy puppies. She is interested in laptops, cellphones, wires, earphones, chargers and the like. My husband says she has two possible development tendencies: either to be a scientist or an Internet geek.
When using a comma to separate items of a list, separate all except the last two with commas. The final two items are normally separated with a conjunction such as and or or.
I think this is OK.
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