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Hi, there. My name is Yi-Ping Tsai, it's my Chinese name and It's is a little hard to pronounce exactly for those whose native tongues are not tonal 1. I like my Chinese name very much, so I would like to be known by this name. Thank you. hope you can call my Chinese name. I am a senior, my subject is majoring in Education. However, but I prefer to be in the Arts instead than education. The reason I want to learn and improve English is because my English it is not enough good enough to communicate and , so I want to improve my language. I also want meet other people from other cultures, so it can and to broaden my horizon myhorizons.
By the way, Taiwan is a beautiful island, you should visit the place if possible. :)
Your basic English is not bad. However, you still write in a style of a native English speaking kid. I am showing you a more mature way of expressing. I am sure you are smart to make this leap.
1. Instead of saying Westerners as in your original intent.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, there. My name is Yi-Ping Tsai, it's my Chinese name. It's a little hard to pronounce exactly. I like my Chinese name very much, so I hope you can call my Chinese name. I am a senior, my subject is education, but I prefer art than education. The reason I want to learn English is because my English is not enough good, so I want to improve my language. I also want meet other people from other culture, so it can broaden myhorizons.
By the way, Taiwan is a beautiful island, you should visit if possible. :)
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