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What makes a good life? One of my friends asked me a question, “What makes a good life?” It seemed to be an easy question. However, I could not answer until thinking for one minute. Actually, it was too big to grasp the core. My answer was “love, happiness and fulfillment of dreams.” It was absolutely not a good answer. I could not think and express more at that moment. Now I want to tell more about my definition of a good life. For me, a good life involves being rich in both physical and spiritual sense. I want to have enough wealth, not too much, just enough for my family to live a better life. I want to satisfactorily play my various roles as a daughter, a wife, a mother, a friend, a student, an employee, etc. I want to mean something to others, especially my loved ones. If they think it is a bless having me in their lives, that would be the best reward to me. Meaning of life lies in what you offer rather than what you get.

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What makes a good life?

One of my friends asked me a question, “What makes a good life?” It seemed to be an easy question. However, I could not answer until thinking for one minute. Actually, it was too big to grasp the core. My answer was “love, happiness and fulfillment of dreams.” It was absolutely not a good answer. I could not think and express more at that moment. Now I want to tell more about my definition of a good life.
For me, a good life involves being rich in both physical and spiritual sense. I want to have enough wealth, not too much, just enough for my family to live a better life. I want to satisfactorily play my various roles as a daughter, a wife, a mother, a friend, a student, an employee, etc. I want to mean something to others, especially my loved ones. If they think it is a blessing having me in their lives, that would be the best reward to me. The meaning of life lies in what you offer rather than what you get.

Very eloquent!

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Thanks! Both of us need improvement in English.
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Your writing is very good. I sympathize with you. ^^*

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