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Tales of Bro Ted My name is Bro Ted. It is a short form of my name, Brown Teddy Bear. I don’t like my name because it looks like I’m a girlish teddy bear but of course I’m a pure male bear. I was born in a factory which is I don’t know where and apparently I have thousands of brothers and sisters. We used to be together but I got separated from them when there was a big fat ugly girl took me away. Huh!! I really wish my master would be a cute sexy and pretty girl. I guess world is not fair. In the house, I have my very own space on the bed. Every night I will sleep with my master and every time I will feel like dying as she will hug me tightly until I couldn’t breathe. What an annoying master. I will be very thankful if she could leave me alone on the bed so that I can have a peaceful time to sleep. But she never responds when I told her to leave me alone. I guess my voice is not loud enough. Not only that, she is a very hot tempered girl and this make it worse for me. Whenever she feels upset, she will use me as her punching bag. My whole body is hurt everyday and I used to think to run away but my legs just don’t want to move. I wonder why. I really hate her and right now I’m making a plan for my revenge. It will be a perfect plan for her. So you all have to wait for my revenge and my last advice is don’t mess with the teddies.

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Tales of Bro Ted

My name is Bro Ted. It is a short form of my name, Brown Teddy Bear. I don’t like my name because it looks like I’m a girlish teddy bear but of course I’m a pure male bear. I was born in a factory which is I don’t know where and apparently I have thousands of brothers and sisters. We used to be together but I got separated from them when there was a big fat ugly girl took me away. Huh!! I really wish my master would be a cute sexy and pretty girl. I guess the world is not fair.

In the house, I have my very own space on the bed. Every night I will sleep with my master and every time I will feel like dying as she will hugs me tightly until I can’t breathe. What an annoying master. I would be very thankful if she could leave me alone on the bed so that I can have a peaceful time to sleep. But she never responds when I tell her to leave me alone. I guess my voice is not loud enough.

Not only that, she is a very hot tempered girl and this make it worse for me. Whenever she feels upset, she will uses me as her punching bag. My whole body is hurt everyday and I used to think of run away but my legs just don’t want to move. I wonder why. I really hate her and right now I’m making a plan for my revenge. It will be a perfect plan for her. So you all have to wait for my revenge and my last advice is don’t mess with the teddies.

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