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Went to the epidemic prevention station. - 20111121 He need to take a hepatitis B vaccine today. I went to the epidemic prevention station with him. There were some kids there talking injections. They cried in the injection room. I was nervous when I entered. Even if I knew that I would not be given an injection. It seemed that he was brave enough. I had to cover my eyes when it was his turn. The doctor told him that he could neither take a shower nor do any physical exercise today. He should drink more water. Hmm, I reminded him in the afternoon. It was happy to help others. I watched some videos last week. All of them were about terrible disasters that happened in the past century. Such as the earthquake in Los angles, the nuclear leak in 1986 and hostage issues. It made me feel that I must cherish my life. I must sleep earlier.

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Went to the epidemic prevention station. - 20111121

He needs to take a hepatitis B vaccine today. I went to the epidemic prevention station with him. There were some kids there talking injections. They cried in the injection room. I was nervous when I entered. Even if I knew that I would not be given an injection.

It seemed that he was brave enough. I had to cover my eyes when it was his turn. The doctor told him that he could neither take a shower nor do any physical exercise today. He should drink more water. Hmm, I reminded him in the afternoon.

It is happy to help others.

I watched some videos last week. All of them were about terrible disasters that happened in the past century. Such as the earthquake in Los angles, the nuclear leak in 1986 and hostage issues. It made me feel that I must cherish my life.

I must sleep earlier.

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A visit Went to the epidemic prevention station. - 20111121

He (who?  My friend, My dad, my boss ??) needed to have a hepatitis B vaccination today. I went to the epidemic prevention station with him. There were some kids there talking injections; they were crying in the injection room. I was nervous when I entered, even though I knew that I would not be given an injection.

It seemed that he was brave enough. I had to cover my eyes when it was his turn. The doctor told him that he could neither take a shower nor do any physical exercise for the rest of the day. He should also drink more water. Hmm, I reminded him in the afternoon.

It was happy to be able to help others.

I watched some videos last week. All of them were about terrible disasters that happened in the past century, such as the earthquake in Los Angeles, the nuclear leak in 1986 and hostage issues. It made me feel that I must cherish my life.

I must go to bed earlier.

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