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every thing will be ok suddenly,i understand that the troubles are gived by myself .why i'm not happy ,just beacuse i'm care about thoes person who are not care you . And i even made a mistake that i thought them are important person in my life . Now, i know that it is my fault ,unless i have realized this fact,i will learn to change this . there are so many beautiful thing in life.like the song innocence sing.little things make life great . Be normal,Be happy.Fighting

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Every thing will be ok

Suddenly, I find that the troubles are always given by myself. Why I'm not happy? Just beacuse I i'm ("care"是行为动词原形,前面不能出现系动词,如果要加"be", "care"不能用原形,要用分词形式,而且此时"be"当助动词不做系动词,这里是主动式的一般现在时,我们不用分词,所以直接删除"am") care for("care about"是"担心",而"care for"是"关心/关怀") somebody who does not care for you .
And I even made a mistake that I thought them are important for me.(可以用"I thought them important..."或者"I thought they are important...". 如果用"I thought them important...", "them" 是宾语, "important..."是宾语补足语,宾语和宾语补足语之间有种逻辑上的主谓关系,之间不需要加任何谓语或者系动词;如果用"I thought they are important...", 实际上是省略了关系代词"that"的宾语从句, "they"是从句的主语, 所以不能用宾格,必须用主格) Now, I know that it is my fault, unless I have realized it, I will not learn to change this.  There are so many beautiful things in life, like the song innocence singing: little things make life great . Be normal, be happy. Fighting

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Everything Will Be Okay

Suddenly, I understand that the my troubles are gived caused by myself. I realize why I'm not happy. just It is beacuse i'm I care about thoes person people who are do not care you about me.
And i even I made a the mistake that i thought them are of thinking they were important person people in my life.
Now, I know that it is my fault, and unless now that I have realized this fact, I will learn to change this things.
There are so many beautiful things in life. Like the song,"Innocence." ???? sing Little things make life great.
Be normal,Be happy.Fighting ????  I will stay strong and be optimsitic.

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这是很难正确的,因为我不明白你想要说英语。我不会说中国话。对不起,我希望我能帮助更多的。

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Be normal, Great!

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