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Fall or Winter? Today, the weather was snowy and very cold and a lot of snow was sit on the ground... We are in Fall but It seems the Winter can not be patient and wants to coming very soon =) I asked my boyfriend to join me to play with snow and build a snowman but we couldn't see each other... maybe at the other times ;) and now, at midnight, Beyond the window, Snow falls too... I love the snow...

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Fall or Winter?

Today the weather was snowy and very cold, and a lot of snow lay on the ground. We are in autumn, but it seems winter can not be patient and wants to come early! =) I asked my boyfriend to join me to play in the snow and build a snowman, but we couldn't see each other... maybe another time. ;)
And now, at midnight, beyond the window, snow falls again...
I love snow...

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Fall or Winter?

Today, the weather was snowy and very cold.  There is much and a lot of snow was sit on the ground... We are in Fall autumn but It seems the that winter can not be is not patient and wants to come in a hurrying very soon =) I asked my boyfriend to join me to play have some fun with the snow.  I wanted to  and build a snowman but he could not join me. we couldn't see each other... maybe at Oh well, some the other times then ;)

It is midnight now.  Snow is falling outside of my window...
and now, at midnight, Beyond the window, Snow falls too...
I love the snow...

Good piece of imagery.

 

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