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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
As I've already written, I'm a cosmetologist. To learn more about new technologies, cosmetic drugs and so on, I have to read foreign literature. Sometimes I travel abroad, so I need a good level of English.
A few words about myself. I'm married, have 2 daughters, 1 and 2.5 years old. I like cats and dogs but because of the children we can't keep a pet - the children may hurt them.
So that's all for a while. I'll be happy to hear from you.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
As I`ve already written, I`m a cosmetologist. In order to learn more about new technologies, cosmetic drugs and so on i have to read foreign literature. Sometimes I travel abroad. So i need [better:] a good level of English for it.
Few words about myself. I`m married, have 2 daughters: 1 and 2,5 years old. I like cats and dogs but because of the children we can`t afford to have any pet - children may hurt them.
So, that`s all for a while. I`ll be happy to have an answer from you.
As I`ve already written, I`m a cosmetologist. In order to learn more about new technologies, cosmetic drugs and so on i have to read foreign literature. Sometimes I travel abroad. So i need [better:] a good level of English for it.
Few words about myself. I`m married, have 2 daughters: 1 and 2,5 years old. I like cats and dogs but because of the children we can`t afford to have any pet - children may hurt them.
So, that`s all for a while. I`ll be happy to have an answer from you.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
As I've already written, I'm a cosmetologist. To learn more about new technologies, cosmetic drugs and so on, I have to read foreign literature. Sometimes I travel abroad, so I need a good level of English.
A few words about myself. I'm married, have 2 daughters, 1 and 2.5 years old. I like cats and dogs but because of the children we can't keep a pet - the children may hurt them.
So that's all for a while. I'll be happy to hear from you.
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