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My favourite song My favourite song is "Dance with My Father".It's a beautiful melody. I'd like to share everyone the beautiful melody,and I love my father. I suggest that, if you have time you can dance with your dad,I think it's great.

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My Favourite Song

My favourite song is "Dance with My Father". It's has a beautiful melody. I'd like to share with everyone the this beautiful melody.  ,and Besides I love my father. I suggest that, if you have the time,  you can dance with your dad.  I think it's it is great.

Good idea but it is strange in many cultures for a son to dance with his father.

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My Favourite Song

My favourite song is "Dance with My Father".It is a beautiful song.
I like to share everyone the beautiful melody. Besides I love my father. I suggest that, if you have the time  dance with your dad,I think it is a good idea.

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