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Don't want to grow up!

There is a song named "Don't want to grow up!",_I have the same feeling that I do not want to grow up!

It is a happy time when we are in [our] childhood._Because my hometown is a small village, all the children there are friends,_we go to school together,_do homework together after school and play together. Nothing to troubles us and we are happy everyday.

Notes:
1. lists are always "something, something, something and something".
2. I (referring to yourself) is always I and not i.
3. A full stop (.) and comma (,) always have a space after and not before.

But it changed as we [continue to] grow up ceaselessly, a lot of things start to trouble us._Everyone has their own life: they go to school, go to work, fall in love, get married,_so we have very few meetings and very little contact.

or "so we meet less and less and have very little real contact".
Notes: a "meeting" is used to refer to a business meeting instead of a personal one. When we are meeting friends, we just say we are going to meet them, or use meeting as a verb rather than a noun (if this is not clear, msg me and I will explain in more detail).

_I speak less words but I look at their Status updates on QQ everyday,_in fact,_with complex [contradictory] mood,_I am worried when they are not happy while i feel lonely if they are happy.

The reason for that "I do not want to grow up";_maybe I do not want to face everyone's change, maybe I have no courage to face the fact, maybe I am not happy now.

Notes:
1. "maybe" is not quite the same as "may be", in the same way "everyday" is not the same as "every day". Confusing I know :(
2. semi-colons (;) are used rarely in written form and denote a slightly longer pause than a comma (,) try to use them very sparingly.

安德鲁/祖父

may be = could happen in the future.