中華鱉在河流的浅滩

一只中華鱉有二十五公分长的甲壳的，在河流的浅滩安静地待。它发觉一个人的阴影时，就赶快逃泳了。然后，它一边儿散布泥一边儿去河岸的草丛下藏身了。

A Soft-shelled Turtle with a 25cm-long-shelter had been staying still in the shallow of the river. As soon as it noticed a human's shadow, it swam away quickly. Then it hid under the grass with raising up mud.

中华鳖在河流的浅滩

一只中华鳖
用二十五公分长
盔甲武装，
在河流的浅滩上
安静地驻扎。

人影一晃，
它警惕非常，
做了个逃兵游走，
像梭子一样。

这还没完，
它还要跟你躲迷藏。
潜伏在草丛之下，
还要加上泥泞的伪装。

（做一回丛林特种兵，
你看怎样？）

中華鱉在河流的浅滩

一只中華鱉有二十五公分长的甲壳，在河流的浅滩上安静地待着。当它发觉有一个人的阴影时，就赶快游泳逃跑了。然后，它去河岸的草丛下，堆起泥土将自己藏身其中。

A Soft-shelled Turtle with a 25cm-long-shelter had been staying still in the shallow of the river. As soon as it noticed a human's shadow, it swam away quickly. Then it hid under the grass with raising up mud.

中華鱉在河流的浅滩

一只有二十五公分长的甲壳的中華鱉，在河流的浅滩中安静地待着。当它发觉一个人的阴影时，就赶快逃进水里游走。然后，它一边儿拨开泥一边儿钻进河岸的草丛下藏起身子。

A Soft-shelled Turtle with a 25cm-long-shelter had been staying still in the shallow of the river. As soon as it noticed a human's shadow, it swam away quickly. Then it hid under the grass with raising up mud.

中华鳖在河流的浅滩　　

一只有二十五公分长甲壳的中华鳖，在河流的浅滩安静地待着。当它发觉有人影时，就赶快逃进水里游走了。然后，它一边挑起河泥一边游向河岸的草丛下藏了起来。

最后这句话“一边”不用加“儿”

中華鱉在河流的浅滩

一只有二十五公分长的甲壳的中華鱉，在河流的浅滩上安静地待着。当它发觉有人影时，就很快逃走了。然后，它一会儿在泥上散步，一会儿藏在河岸的草丛下了。

A Soft-shelled Turtle with a 25cm-long-shelter had been staying still in the shallow of the river. As soon as it noticed a human's shadow, it swam away quickly. Then it hid under the grass with raising up mud.