Some confused words

I come from the far north (or: the most northerly part) of China, and when I was young I never dreamed of coming to Guangdong, which is (located) in the southmost part of China.

But, wow, life is amazing. Yes, I came here to pursuing my dream,although I have not succeeded yet. I know I still have a long way to go.

I am looking forward to the funny things that I have never encountered before. I want to meet my Mr. Right here. Who will be that man? I don't know.

A few weeks ago, I went to the Yuexiu Park in Guangzhou; a nice place. Wish I could visit more places in China. That is also my dream.

Everybody, have a nice day.

Your words are not so confusing, Shasha.  Remember to leave a space your punctuation marks.  

Some confused words

I come from the most northerly part (1) of China.When I was young and I have never dreamed of coming to Guangdong,which placed is in the southernmost part of China.when I was young.

But wow,life is amazing.Yes, I came here to pursuing  persue my dream, although I  am have not succeeded yet, now .I know I still have a long way to go.

I am looking forward to the funny things that I have never experianced met before, I want to meet my Mr.right here, who will be that man ? I don't know.

A few weeks ago, I went to the Yuexiu Park of Guangzhou, a nice place. I wish I could go to more places in  of China, it is also part of my dream.

Everybody,have a nice day.

(1) Northest is not a word, it could be that  you mean North East, North West, or the most northerly part of China I do not know, but I think it is what I have written. :)

Some confused words

I come from the northest of China,and I have never dreamed of coming to Guangdong,which placed in the southest of China,when I was young.

But,wow,life is amazing.yes, I came here to pursuse my dream,although I am not succeed now.I know I still have a long way to go,

I am looking forward to funny things that I have never met before,I want to meet my Mr.right here,I don't know who would be that man.

A few weeks ago, I went to the Yuexiu Park of Guangzhou,a nice place. Wish I could go to more places of China.It is also my dream.

Everybody,have a nice day.