Writting:Getting to Know the World outside the Campus
It's my homwork.
1.大学生了解社会的必要性
2.了解社会的途径
3.我打算怎么做
It's commonly recognized that university students is a part of society.So it's neccessary for university students to know the world outside the campus.With the development of the society, it's an irresistible trend for students to go outside to get to know the world. So they can widen their horizon and aqcuire more knowledge and skills that they can't learn from books. By doing this , they also have chance to lay a soild foundation for their future or make contributions for the society. It's essential for students to keep the pace with the society.
There are so many ways for students to get to know the world . With the development of science and techology, internet has become the best way for us to get to know the world. Also some people get to know the world by watching TV or listenning to the radio and so on.
Personally, I'll find a part-time job, so I can meet more interesting people. By doing this, I think I'll learn a lot about the society. To be a volunteer, also a good way to get in touch with society.
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It seems like a CET-4 or -6 writing practice. I consider it is generally good and can enable you to get an acceptable score in the test. In addition to some minor mistakes, the primary problem you may expect to tackle is that, the main body paragraph (i.e. the 2nd paragragh) is a bit shorter, therefore may be extended and cover more details, as the 1st one seems not worth that long. As far as I know, CET is coming soon and I hope a satisfactory band could be attained.
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Writting:Getting to Know the World outside the Campus
It's my homwork.
1.大学生了解社会的必要性
2.了解社会的途径
3.我打算怎么做
It's commonly recognized that university students is a part of society.So it's neccessary for university students to know the world outside the campus.With the development of the society, it's an irresistible trend for students to go outside to get to know the world. So they can widen their horizon and aqcuire more knowledge and skills which can't learn from books. By doing this , they also have chance to lay a soild foundation for their future or make contributions for the society. It's essential for students to keep the pace with the society.
There are so many ways for students to get to know the world . With the development of science and techology, internet has become the best way for us to get to know the world. Also some people get to know the world by watching TV or listenning to the radio and so on.
Personally, I'll find a part-time job, so I can meet more interesting people. By doing this, I think I'll learn a lot about the society. To be a volunteer, also a good way to get in touch with society.
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