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help me wiz my hk ,thx . there is no denying that some ppl killing more animals and useing their parts made of fashion items . However , ppl argue that useing animals' parts in the name of fashion is unacceptable . Those who support animal's rights think its very cruel to animal . When considering this debate,it is therefore important to look at both sides of argument

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It cannot be denied that some people kill animals and use them to make fashion's items . However , there are people who argue that using dead animals in the name of fashion is unacceptable because is too cruel. When speaking about this, we have to look at both sides of the coin.

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help me wiz my hk ,thx .

there is no denying that some ppl killing more animals and useing their parts made of fashion items . However , ppl argue that useing animals' parts in the name of fashion is unacceptable . Those who support animal's rights think its very cruel to animal . When considering this debate,it is therefore important to look at both sides of argument

There is no denying that people kill animals for use in the fashion industry. However, people who believe in animal rights believe that the use of animals in the name of fashion is unacceptable and cruel. When considering this issue, it's important to consider both sides of the situation.  


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Animal fur is sometimes used in the fashion industry for clothes items, however many animal rights supporters argue that this practice is cruel and a waste of life.  When considering this debate, it is important to look at both sides of the argument.

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