2011年10月28日

今天早上我上完课。然后我很懒（，不想干别的事）。我看多少就看了会儿电视。我最爱的电视剧是灵书妙探，灵异妙探，海军罪案调查处：洛杉矶，和识骨寻踪。这些都很好！

This morning I had class. Then I was very lazy. I watched a lot of TV. My favorite TV shows are Castle, Psych, NCIS: LA, and Bones. They are very good!

2011年10月28日

今天早上我上课。然后我很懒。我看了很多多少电视。我最爱的电视剧是灵书妙探，灵异妙探，海军罪案调查处：洛杉矶，和识骨寻踪。这些（都）很好！

Usually, we use 了 to express past tence and a lot of means 很多, but 多少 means how, which, as you know, is usually used in a question.

都 is not compulsive here, however, with it you can get a better expression and we get a better understanding, which also means, we can totally understand what you are saying even if you don't use it.

Good job, keep practicing!

2011年10月28日

今天早上我上课。然后我很懒。

The logical relationship here is not very clear, I think you want to say that you then was very lazy AFTER the course, so you should add the context. It's not really easy to realize this because in English, a word "then" is enough, but if you translate it directly, it will be very strange, so a better exprassion is上完课后，我就变得很懒。

我看多少电视。

a lot of=很多， 我看很多电视

This exprassion is not good, when we say 电视，we mean the TV set, when you want to say the TV programs, you should say 电视节目, and it took place in the past time, therefore you should add a了

我看了很多电视节目。

我最爱的电视剧是《灵书妙探》，《灵异妙探》，《海军罪案调查处》：《洛杉矶》，和《识骨寻踪》。

With a special mark when refer to a book, film, TV program, or some other works.

这些都很好！

all of them are very good, so 都is necessary.

Another problem is, this sentence talks nothing, One use this sentence only to give a universal value, and here, it's clear that you want to say "there programs are good TO SEE" . so it's nature to add it  in order to attribute to "good", so a better sentence is这些都很好看。 

This morning I had class. Then I was very lazy. I watched a lot of TV. My favorite TV shows are Castle, Psych, NCIS: LA, and Bones. They are very good!