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There is a huge yellow dog arround my house; .  He's  a very big and 1 cool looking one, he is the species of dogs people call them The species is the Golden Retriever.  It 2
he has long yellow shining hairs , bright sharp eyes, and a big head.   he is not very fat or thin, his It's build is neither fat nor thin but to me the ears are funny like a leaf from tree.  , among his friends he Among all dogs, it must be the most handsome good looking to meone,

he is very It has a gentle nature and when you touch him, he tongue your fingers or faces to it shows his its love to you by licking your hand or your face! .aha,that is a wonderful What an icky but wonderful feeling. Do you like tall and high large dogs ?
or maybe you love little guys perhaps you prefer smaller ones as pets ?

1.   You have already mentioned previously.  So this is redundant.

2.  Unless you are definite about its gender, use "it" instead.

The big yellow dog nearby

There is a huge yellow dog around my house. He's very big and cool.  He is the species of dogs. People call them a Golden Retriever.
He has long, yellow shining hairs, bright sharp eyes, and a big head. He is not very fat or thin. His ears look funny (like a leaf from tree).  Among his friends, he must be the most handsome one.

He is very gentle when you touch him. He licks your fingers or face to show his love to you. Ah! That is a wonderful feeling! Do you like big and tall dogs? Or, maybe you love little guys as pets?