Summer Vacation
I have just enjoyed 3 days of my long summer vacation,even though it's the beginning,I felt a little boring.Every day,I lived a monotonous life:sleeping,watching TV,playing tennis and so on.I can't find something special to do so that I feel upset.Because of the bad weather,I have no choice but to stay at home all day.Sometimes,I really want to go back to school,playing with all my classmates.No,I can't stand such kind of life,I must adjust myself to the free and relaxed atmosphere,finding something meaningful to pursue.I believe that my summer vacation will become colorful after my adjustment.
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Summer Vacation
I have just enjoyed (the first) 3 days of my long summer vacation,even though it's the beginning, I felt a little bored. Every day, I live a monotonous life: sleeping, watching TV, playing tennis and so on. I can't find something special to do so () I feel upset. Because of the bad weather, I have no choice but to stay at home all day. Sometimes, I really want to go back to school, playing with all my classmates. No, (not really), I can't stand such () a life, I must adjust myself to the free and relaxed atmosphere, finding something meaningful to pursue. I believe that my summer vacation will become colorful after my adjustment.Hi Mandy
Watch that you include spaces after each punctuation (comma, full stop etc).
Pretty good though, just a couple of mistakes with the tenses. the green are just additions to make the flow a little better, but it's fine without them too.
Cheers,
Andrew.
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