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Traditional chinese medicine---中醫 原文 今天早上,當我蹲下脫鞋子時,突然感覺到我的大腿疼痛了起來,所以我決定下班後,我要去看中醫,首先,他放熱毛巾在我腿上,然後在我腿上的穴位,作了針炙治療,推斷是姿勢不良,導致肌肉拉傷,最後,他幫我用草藥及繃帶包紮我的大腿,看來這幾天,我不能走太快也不能去運動了....真難過 This morning,when I took off my shoes,I suddenly felt my thigh painful,so I decided to see a doctor of traditional chinese medicine after off work. First,he put a hot towel on my thigh,then use needle pierced points of it. He judged that I must got a improper posture and led to muscle twisted. Finally,he used herb medicine and wrapped bandages around my thigh. It seems like I can't walk too fast and do sports recently...so sad

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Traditional chinese medicine---中醫

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今天早上,當我蹲下脫鞋子時,突然感覺到我的大腿疼痛了起來,所以我決定下班後,我要去看中醫,首先,他放熱毛巾在我腿上,然後在我腿上的穴位,作了針炙治療,推斷是姿勢不良,導致肌肉拉傷,最後,他幫我用草藥及繃帶包紮我的大腿,看來這幾天,我不能走太快也不能去運動了....真難過

Suddenly, this morning, when as I took off my shoes, I suddenly felt great pain my thigh painful,so that I decided to see a doctor of traditional Chinese medicine doctor after off work. First, he put a hot towel on my thigh and proceeded to use the accupuncture needles at the meridian points.  ,then use needle pierced points of it. He judged diagnosis is that I must got a improper posture and led to had caused a muscle sprain twisted. Finally, he used herbs medicine and wrapped bandages around bandaged my thigh with herbs. It seems like that for the next few days I can't will not be able to walk too fast or do any exercise. and do sports recently... So sad.

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Traditional chinese medicine---中醫

原文

今天早上,當我蹲下脫鞋子時,突然感覺到我的大腿疼痛了起來,所以我決定下班後,我要去看中醫,首先,他放熱毛巾在我腿上,然後在我腿上的穴位,作了針炙治療,推斷是姿勢不良,導致肌肉拉傷,最後,他幫我用草藥及繃帶包紮我的大腿,看來這幾天,我不能走太快也不能去運動了....真難過

 

This morning when I took my shoes off I suddenly felt a pain in my thigh. I decided to go and see a Chinese doctor after work. The doctor first put a hot towel on my thigh and then he used acupuncture on my pressure points. The doctor assessed that I must have twisted my muscle due to improper posture. Lastly, the doctor used an herb medicine and he wrapped bandages aroung my thigh. It seems that I now can't walk too fast or participate in any sports which is very sad.

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Traditional chinese medicine---中醫

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今天早上,當我蹲下脫鞋子時,突然感覺到我的大腿疼痛了起來,所以我決定下班後,我要去看中醫,首先,他放熱毛巾在我腿上,然後在我腿上的穴位,作了針炙治療,推斷是姿勢不良,導致肌肉拉傷,最後,他幫我用草藥及繃帶包紮我的大腿,看來這幾天,我不能走太快也不能去運動了....真難過

This morning,when I took off my shoes,I suddenly felt my thigh painful,so I decided to see a doctor of traditional chinese medicine after off work. First,he put a hot towel on my thigh,then use needle pierced points of it. He judged that I must got a improper posture and led to muscle twisted. Finally,he used herb medicine and wrapped bandages around my thigh. It seems like I can't walk too fast and do sports recently...so sad

This morning,when I took off my shoes,I suddenly felt a pain in my thigh so I decided to see a traditional chinese doctorafter work. First,he put a hot towel on my thigh then used a needle to pierce my body. He concluded that I must have gotten an improper posture which led to my muscle pain. Finally,he used herbal medicine and wrapped bandages around my thigh. It seems that I can no longer play sports or walk really fast.  I am very sad!

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