I'm a little disopointed about the results My Disappointing Results. 1

Last week, I was preparing for a teaching competition. My topic is about deals with a complicated theoretics theory on completing of the complete dentures 2. The reason I chose it is because most of the students even can't catch the principle of this theory after they finish study or work for many years cannot grasp its basic concepts even to those who had finished their courses well into their working career. I checked a number of books and papers about the topic, and made up a poesy to help students remember the theory. made much research and even composed a poem to help students remember.  However, I losed lost the match at last because I was teaching but not showing, I made a wrong understanding about the teaching match I was lecturing and not in giving some entertainment value. I'm sure I am a good teacher, but not a good lousy competitor.

I guess you didn't see the true intent of the nature of the competition.  It is funny how I commented on your title before reading your essay.  Your title is correct and has more information but that makes it dowdy as a title.  You need to sex it up a bit.  For example, my next essay is 倩女幽魂.  The producers of the movie, did not chose "The Beautiful Lady Ghost".  Though correct but not sexy enough.  Instead the title is "A Chinese Ghost Story" to lure in potential audience.  In life we must know how to make a little lie here and there.  However beware....  Lang Lang(?) the Chinese pianist plays the instrument in technical excellence but puts many people off due to his over theatrics.  He was trying to imitate the American pianist, Liberace.  Liberace has more style that is natural and seemed more natural than his. 

1.  Titles should be short, crisp, to the point and yet exciting to catch readers' eyes.  The title is like advertising.  Here you want not only people to read your essay but to catch those who can correct it as well.  A long winded title is of no interest to many people.  Just a human psychology for you. :)

2.  Since I'm no dentist, I am not sure if there are specific meaning to these dental terms.  I'm only guessing and correcting from a stand point of ordinary English usage.  If I am wrong, please let us all know.