This week I found so tired
This week I still study at school without went back home.I feel so tired because I have 8 lessons in daytime and have 3 lessons in the evening.Our heat teacher said that it was not enough for us and we should study after the lessons of evening.
We didn't have too much homework to do this week ,but I did a lot of practices until 12:00pm.
Now I am staying at home and surf the Internet ,I am worried about next week,I need to go to school on Sunday morning.
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This week I found so tired tiring
This week I am still studying at school without went going back home. I feel so tired because I have 8 lessons in the daytime and have 3 lessons in the evening. Our heat （你什么意思？ Heat？）teacher said that it was not enough for us and we should study after the evening lessons of evening.
We didn't have too much homework to do this week ,but I did a lot of practices exercises until 12:00pm.
Now I am staying at home and surfing the Internet ,I am worried about next week,I need to go to school on Sunday morning.
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恩，标点的确有些问题，仍需改正。
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第一，抛开语法方面，标点有问题。。。第二，介词后好像不接分词吧。第三，时态有点混乱了，this week还没过吧，怎么用了过去式。第四，句式要对称。第五，两个独立的主句如果不接连词and, but之类的中间的是分号，而不是逗号。第六，用classes更好。
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