누군가 도움을 줬으면,  도움을  갚는 것을 잊지 마세요.  제 에세이 좀 수정해 주시겠어요? 제가 수정한 글을 확인해 주시면 감사하겠습니다. 

Usually if we pass a job interview, we get the job.

Again and Again...

I didn't get a phone call informing me (telling me) that I got the job today. The governments keep saying that they're going to give a lot of opportunities to the  unemployed. However, (it) seems like that's not going to be happened. There must be some reasons why I didn't make it but, I'm pretty sure that I have been studied and prepared enough for the interview.  Even though, it's really is disappointing. By the way, I won't stop trying until I get the job that I've have dreamed of all my life, a job I know I'll love. I know that all my efforts will pay off in the end.

Cheer up, Vicky!! <  We tell ourselves to cheer up.  We might say, 

I know I can do it!

그건대문자로써야합니다.   

단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             

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맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.   

제코멘트나  제안입니다.     

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