a brief introduction of myself

Hello, everybody!  I'm I am a newbie here,  a fresh man 1 to this site. I'm Chinese and now living in Kunshan 2 city, which is nearby Shanghai. I want to practise my English with anyone,and anybody.  You can learn Chinese from me. Please correct my mistakes during chatting our chats because my English is not so fluent. Chatting and that will help me a lot much.

1.  Fresh man = 新鮮男人.  Freshman = 第一年大学生.  This is one of the rare instances I don't mind using slang here.  Find out what a newbie is.  Also 我 = I.  No exceptions.

2.  Either you use the old style, Kun Shan or the new style Kunshan but NEVER KunShan.  Other names such as "Shanghai".  You must follow the accepted form in English.  It is NEVER Shang Hai.  Hong Kong never Hongkong or even xianggang.

Your punctuation spacing is atrocious.  If you don't know the rules,

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm