A fantastic movie !
I watched a fatanstic movie named "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button" last night. After that, I was surprised of the actor's imagination and creativity. At the same time, the story was so rich that I was moved deeply. So I recommend that everyone could have a chance to see it.
There were two clues to make the story more fluerent and more natural. The structure of the whole story was really interesting. It showed us a magic life of Benjamin that he was borned as a old baby and then grew up younger and younger. Another side of this movie, it was also a narrate from his wife's month who was going to die.
It lasted 159minutes. Although my eyes were tired, my heart was full of power because of some words in the movie. "You can change or stay the same. There are no rules to this thing. We can make it best or the worst of it. And I hope you make the best of it. I hope you see things that startle you. I hope you feel things you never felt before. I hope you meet people with a different point of view. I hope you live a life you're proud of. And if you find that you're not, I hope you have the strength to start all over again."
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A fantastic movie !
I watched a fatanstic movie named "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button" last night. After that, I was surprised of the actor's imagination and creativity. At the same time, the story was so rich that I was moved deeply. So I recommend that everyone could have a chance to see it.
There were two clues to make the story more fluerent and more natural. The structure of the whole story was really interesting. It showed us a magic life of Benjamin that he (who) was borned as an old baby and then grew up younger and younger. Another side of this movie, it was also a narrateion from his wife's mouth who was going to die.
It lasted 159minutes. Although my eyes were tired, my heart was full of power because of some words in the movie. "You can change or stay the same. There are no rules to this thing. We can make it best or the worst of it. And I hope you make the best of it. I hope you see things that startle you. I hope you feel things you never felt before. I hope you meet people with a different point of view. I hope you live a life you're proud of. And if you find that you're not, I hope you have the strength to start all over again."
ps_ good job! I liked review:) I decided to check only one paragraph, there are not many mistakes)
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A fantastic movie !
I watched a fantanstic movie named "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button" last night. After that, I was surprised of at the actor's imagination and creativity. At the same time, the story was so rich that I was moved deeply. So I recommend that everyone could have a chance to see it. [ maybe better as "should make time to see it"]
There were two clues to make the story more fluerent and more natural. The structure of the whole story was really interesting. It showed us a magic life of Benjamin that he was borned as a old baby and then grew up younger and younger. Another side of this movie, it was also a narrate from his wife's month mouth who was going to die. [ who was about to die, or who was dying. ]
It lasted 159minutes. Although my eyes were tired, my heart was full of power because of some words in the movie. "You can change or stay the same. There are no rules to this thing. We can make it best or the worst of it. And I hope you make the best of it. I hope you see things that startle you. I hope you feel things you never felt before. I hope you meet people with a different point of view. I hope you live a life you're proud of. And if you find that you're not, I hope you have the strength to start all over again."
Good description. Most of the corrections are just spelling errors. Suggestions for better expression are in blue.
about to = more immediate than going to
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In fact, we always watch the American movie in English and in Chinese at the same time. We would not understand if there is only English on the screen. As for me, listening and speaking are more difficult than reading and writing. :))) I think study language is by no means easy. So I really admire the people who can speak several languages. Especially someone borned in the family that his parents are from different countries.
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...I* was just wondering...
sorry for making mistakes :D
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Thank you very much but I don't believe that my English is much better than yours ;)
Well, it was just wondering if you had watched it in your native language or in English :) I watched the movie in Russian, which is my native language, because I wanted to understand any single detail :)
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