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你好! 很高兴见到(认识)你。
我叫沙拉,我是一个十五岁,的学生从来自美国。我的中文不好,我希望能够提高我的中文水平,这样我就可以交更多的朋友。谢谢。
We can learn language from each other. i want to improve my English and i can teach you Chinese.
你好! 很高兴见到你。
我叫沙拉,我十五岁,是一名美国学生。我的中文不好,我希望通过交朋友来提高中文水平。谢谢。
你好! 很高兴见到认识你。
我叫沙拉,我是一个十五岁的学生,来自从美国。我的中文水平不好,我希望通过交朋友来提高自己的中文水平。, 谢谢。
你好! 很高兴见到你。
我叫沙拉,我是一个从美国来的十五岁的学生从美国(The place of adverb is quit different from English, basically, when it modifies the noun {like here, modifies the word "student", it should be put in front of it):。我的中文不好,我希望提高交朋友(two verbs stay here, it's quit strange- you mean "improve my Chinese and make same friends?" or "improve it in order to make same friend"? the former:我希望提高我的中文并和大家交朋友, later:我希望提高我的中文来和大家交朋友, they are quit different...。谢谢。
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