The National Day holiday. - 20111001

I am in KFC now waiting for the bus to leave at 3am. I had too much chicken and cola in the past two hours. I feel sleepy now. Especially so when I hear someone snoring near to me. I cannot imagine myself getting on the bus and could only getting off after at least eight hours later. It is going to be a long journey!

Someone was wondered ing why I made such a 1 rapid progress in English. I would like to tell them that 1 It is because I have been practising for nearly one year in Italki. I benefited much a lot. I had never had been working so hard in English. I will keep up on going until I am too old to learn anything.

I will have am going to a special business trip in the middle of October. I look forward to meeting more people and learning from them.

1.  In having these two words, will make you sound like some pompous person.  You don't want to be like that.  Humility in one's essay is always good as it offends no one.  Same thing for this situation, "I would like to tell them..." sounds a bit high and mighty as if you are a professor or something.  Translate into Chinese and you will get my meaning.  When people reads an essay, it depends on their mood.  It can come out totally different in their minds as opposed to what you wanted to express originally.  This way, it minimisizes misunderstanding.

The National Day holiday. - 20111001

I am in KFC now waiting for the bus to leave at 3am. I had too much chicken and cola in the past two hours. I feel sleepy now. Especially when I hear someone snoring near to me. I cannot imagine myself getting on the bus and can only get off after at least eight hours. It is a long journey!

Someone was wondering why I made such a rapid progress in English. I would like to tell them that I have been practising for nearly one year in Italki. I benefit a lot. I have never been working so hard in English. I will keep up until I am too old to learn anything.

I will have a special business trip in the middle of October. I look forward to meeting more people and learning from them.

Your english is really good! Amazing after a year! Wow.