Montreal is a Beautiful City.

Last week, I and my friend and I visted Montreal, which  .She is a very beautiful city.

Although We it took us seven 7 long hours to drive there from Toronto to Montreal., it was definitely worth the time/the trouble.

In Montreal, Shortly after we had arrived, we were lucky/fortunate enough to meet a local We met a resident, who also happened to a [English?] teacher. which were never know. As our experiences with him later showed/proved, he He is was a good man.

He said he would like offered to lead us look around the city/He offered to guide us.../He offered to serve as our guide.... since/as he was fluent He both in English and French.

My friend's spoken English english spoken is excellent, so.So he could easily communicate with the teacher, but with my poor language skills, I simply  i couldn't follow them.  By the time I translated half a sentence, they had already spoken 3 more! Needless to say, I found it/being in that position/that situation it's very frustrating.

Of course, while we were there, we We ate some of the local food, as well as and drank some of the local beer, both of which, were delicious! They were very nice.

I really/honestly/truly enjoyed like the city Montreal very much although even though my poor English skills limited my interaction with the city's residents.  english is poor. Since I saw a lot of paint in murals around the city, i I think the city is one that is full of artists.

Sadly/Unfortunately, we We were only spent one entire/whole/complete day in there and got back then returned home to Toronto in the evening.

I know these sentences has have a lot of errors, but I hope someone can find and correct  them it, and then tell me why or how to write is better.

Yusuke, good job!  Your ideas are there, but you need to "flesh" them out more.  Keep writing, practicing and posting.  (Also, spend more time with your friend, the one who speaks English!) Best of luck!

Montreal is A Beautiful City.

Last week,I and my friend visted Montreal.She is a beautiful city.We took 7 hours to drive from Toronto to Montreal.


In Montreal ,We met a resident teacher which were never know.He is a good man.

He said he would like to lead us look around the city.He both in English and French.

My friend's english spoken is excellent.So he could communicate with the teacher.but i couldn't follow them,It's very frustrating.

We ate local food and drank local beer.They were very nice.

I like the city very much although my english is poor. I saw a lot of paint in the city ,i think the city is full of artist.

We spent one day in there and got back Toronto in the evening.


I know these sentences has a lot of errors,I hope someone can find and correct it,and then tell me why or how to write is better.